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[opowiadanie] o nawiedzeniu domu przez duchy
09-24-2008, 08:08 PM
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[opowiadanie] o nawiedzeniu domu przez duchy
Far far away, happend strange story which I want to tell you. In small wooden house live girl with her mom and sister, her name is Beti. One night when everybody were sleeping in their house was doing strange things. Furnitures were moving around the room, windows were opening and closing with itself. Loud slam woke up Beti. First she though that her sister woke up to drink somethin. But she didn't hear any steps so she went check what happend. She closed all opened window, and check sister's room. Sister was sleeping. Beti came back to her room, but she couldn't sleep. Suddenly she saw that her desk is moving. She wanted to shout but she couldn't. Somebody cover her mouth. She felt second person. She was scared and closed her eyes. When she opened her eyes it was morning around her furnitures were on right place as always. While breakfast she talk about everytging all family, but nobody belived her. She know that this night in her home was probably ghost.
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12-04-2008, 06:33 PM
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