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10-09-2009, 04:13 PM
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Kartka z pamiętnika
Cześć! Big Grin

Mam napisać na angielski dwie krótkie kartki tak jakby z pamiętnika, ale na blogu. Wybrałam temat ostatniej wycieczki. Napisałam, ale nie wiem do końca czy dobrze, więc jeśli ktoś mógłby sprawdzić, to baaaardzo proszę! Będę bardzo wdzięczna. Chodzę do pierwszej klasy gimnazjum i dlatego mój zasób słów nie jest zbyt zaawansowany Blush .

Monday:
Hi!
I wrote on the blog long time ago. I’m sorry, but I haven’t free time.
I and my new class were on the integration trip in Hungarian Mount last. It was fantastic! I met new people which are with me in the class. Now we are very good friends! In Hungarian Mount live very friendly and helpful people. We were often went shopping and we met some interesting people at this time. Countryside was amazing! We all photographed this! : ) In the Hungarian Mount you can walk on the older streets, buy beautiful souvenir and go shopping all time! : )

Tuesday:
Hello!
This day I woke very earlly and I was sleepy. After the breakfast we went explore bunker called ‘Wanderer’. ‘Wanderer’ was seventy years old! The trip was instructive and interesting. We all photographed again. When we went back it was very funny! But then we all were sad, because we musted returned in the home and school. : ( : ( I’m still sad, because I go to school. I can’t wait for the next class’ trip!
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10-11-2009, 12:40 PM
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Monday:
Hi!
I didn't write for a long time. I’m sorry, but I didn't have free time.
I (tutaj nie jestem pewne czy 'I', czy 'me', najlepiej poo protsu byłoby zmienić troszkę szyk zdania) and my new class were on the integration trip in Hungarian Mount last (chodziło o to, że byliście ostatnio na tej wycieczce?). It was fantastic! I got to know new people which are in the class with me. Now we are very good friends! There live very friendly and helpful people in Hungarian Mount. We often went shopping and we met some interesting people at this time. Countryside was amazing! We all photographed it! : ) In the Hungarian Mount you can walk on the older streets, buy beautiful souvenir and go shopping all time! : )

Tuesday:
Hello!
Today I woke very early and I was sleepy. After breakfast we went to explore bunker called ‘Wanderer’. ‘Wanderer’ is (ten bunkier nadal istnieje, prawda? dlatego tutaj trzeba użyć Present Simple.) seventy years old! The trip was instructive (instructive? co miałaś na mysli?) and interesting. We all photographed again. When we went back it was very funny (tutaj coś jest nie tak i ogółem nie brzmi to zbyt ładnie, ale nie bardzo wiem co z tym zrobić)! But then we all were sad, because we had to (must nie ma formy przeszłej, dlatego uzywamy have to w czasie przeszłym - ma ono prawie identyczne znaczenie jak must.) return (już had zaznacza, ze to czas przeszły, dlatego returtn nie ma końcówki -ed) to the home and school. : ( : ( I’m still sad, because I go to school (Ja nadal jestem smutna bo chodzę do szkoły? Nie wiem co chciałaś przez to powiedzieć). I can’t wait for the next class trip!

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10-11-2009, 01:30 PM
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Bardzo proszę o pomoc i rady!!
Ok, poprawiłam. I dodałam też parę nowych zdań. Proszę, sprawdź czy dobrze! Smile

Z góry bardzo, bardzo dziękuję!

Hi!.
I didn't write for a long time. I’m sorry, but I didn’t have free time.
I and my new class were on the integration trip in Hungarian Mount last. It was fantastic! I got to know new people which are with me in the class. Now we are very good friends! In Hungarian Mount live very friendly and smiling people. You can go shopping and you meet some interesting people at this time. Countryside is amazing! We all took a photos it! : ) In the Hungarian Mount you can walk on the older streets, buy beautiful souvenir and walk in the mountains! Smile Generally, in Hungarian Mount you can relax very well, because it is close to nature. Hungarian Mount is really great place!

Today I woke very early and I was sleepy. When you are in Hungarian Mount you can explore bunker call ‘Wanderer’. ‘Wanderer’ is very old, it is seventy years old, but by what is more interesting! The trip was instructive (pouczająca). We all took a photos again. then we all were sad, because we had to return in the home and school. : ( : (. I can’t wait for the next class’ trip!
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10-11-2009, 02:56 PM
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Hi!.
I didn't write for a long time. I’m sorry, but I didn’t have free time.
I and my new class were on the integration trip in Hungarian Mount last. It was fantastic! I got to know new people which are with me in the class. Now we are very good friends! In Hungarian Mount (aaa, zapomniałam dodać, że nazw się nie tłumaczy z reguły... chociaż w sumie niektóre słowniki podają z tyłu taką tabelkę z anglojęzycznymi nazwamiTongue) live very friendly and smiling people. You can go shopping and you meet some interesting people at this time. Countryside is amazing! We all took photos of it! : ) In the Hungarian Mount you can walk on the older streets, buy beautiful souvenirs and walk in the mountains! Generally, in Hungarian Mount you can relax very well, because it is close to nature. Hungarian Mount is really great place!

Today I woke up very early and I was sleepy. When you are in Hungarian Mount you can explore bunker call ‘Wanderer’. ‘Wanderer’ is very old, it is seventy years old but by that is more interesting! The trip was instructive (hmm.. tutaj uzyłabym innego słowa, bo instructive kojarzy mi się z instruowaniem kogoś Tongue). We all took photos again. Then we all were sad, because we had to return to the home and school. : ( : (. I can’t wait for the next class’ trip!

Tyle na moje oko. Mogłam coś pominąć lub niechcący pomylić - w końcu sama nadal się uczę Smile

"JESTEM ZASMUTKOWANY." - Śmierć, "Mort" by Terry Pratchett
http://www.e-francuski.pl/forum/index.php - Forum języka francuskiego i Francji Smile
http://fairy-end.myminicity.com/env - proszę kliknąć czasem ^^
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10-11-2009, 05:42 PM
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Hm, więc mam dać "Węgierska Górka"? Smile

Bardzo, bardzo, bardzo, bardzo Ci dziękuję! ;**
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